First, I re-read and fixed some sentences to flow easier. I added length to the story and re-wrote some of the original to make more sense. I found better adjectives and played around with word choice. It was hard to decide what to keep or take out, but reading it through helped to find what fit most naturally. Overall, I felt revising was improved my pastiche because I saw what hadn't worked before and after not reading it for a few days I felt less attached to what I had written so it was easier to cut out anything that I noticed didn't' work.
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